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When I write,
I slip into a damp nothingness, vaguely
lost
and shuffling through a smoggy coma,
shedding the individuality
anchoring me to
this
physical
shell.

It's an abandon of the consensual mind that
plagues,
an escape in to the symmetrical mess of this planet.

I am not my own,
and
it is only here where I find
the ego
buried inbetween my lungs,
my brain,

and my heart.

And we
converse,
embrace,
rejoice.
.
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:iconblondiezima:
Blondiezima Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student
Phenomenal word choice~!
I love it~ :heart:
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:iconrunning-in-the-rain:
running-in-the-rain Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
merci <3
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VFireFalcon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010   General Artist
The third stanza is great. I've been reading through your gallery, and you have very thought provoking descriptions and imagery.
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:iconrunning-in-the-rain:
running-in-the-rain Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. I should hope sleepy, 5 A.M. descriptions should be at least a tad eccentric ;-)
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:iconvfirefalcon:
VFireFalcon Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010   General Artist
Sleepy, 5 AM descriptions are the best kind. Mine are usually the 3 AM variety though.
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:iconrunning-in-the-rain:
running-in-the-rain Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Ouch. I'm sorry you must suffer through that. Dx :flowerpot:
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